Sunday, January 31, 2010

Fractured Fairy Tale

I wrote this story for school.
Haley


Cinderhamster

Who would have thought that hamsters could fall in love? It was love at first sight when Cinderhamster first saw the prince. She was taking her stephamsters to Hamster Chow for dinner.
On the way out the door, she bonked smack dab into the prince, and hamster sticks rolled everywhere. Her stephamsters start picking up the hamster sticks, but Cinderhamster just stared at the prince, wide eyed in wonder. Her cheeks turned bright red like rubies. She was so nervous that she couldn’t even talk. Her stephamsters invited him for dinner.
She and her stephamsters quickly scurried home to prepare for the prince. As soon as they got home, as usual her stephamsters started ordering her around. ”Cinderhamster get busy on heating up the stove.” “Now!” Her stephamsters were jealous of her beauty. Cinderhamster had green eyes that shone like emeralds and golden fur. The stephamsters had regular brown fur and brown eyes like dirt.
Cinderhamster wanted everything to be perfect for the prince. She was exited and nervous all in one. Cinderhamster had just finished putting the red velvet cushion on the prince’s chair when the doorbell rang and she ran to get it. She let the prince in and then she heated up some of the fresh hamster sticks and set out the plates and they ate. The prince talked about the ball on Sunday. When they heard that he was going to choose one hamster to marry they all squeaked in delight. Next, he talked about what he liked. He said his favorite foods and other things. Last, he thanked them for the dinner and went back to the castle. Cinderhamster than told her stephamsters about how she wanted to marry the prince.
She told her stephamsters to go to Hamsters’ Squeaks and Delights and to get the best ball dresses they had. Next she told them to get shoes that matched.
The next day was the day of the ball. She was very nervous, she was afraid one of her stephamsters would get chosen and not her. So she locked her stepsisters in a cold dark pit. Than she went to the hamster jewelers and got two identical silver rings with a bright green emerald. She went to the ball and danced with the prince until they were so tired they had to stop.
When they announced that Cinderhamster was to marry the prince she squeaked at the top of her lungs. She ran to the prince and gave him one of the rings and she lived in the castle and never saw her stephamsters ever again.

1 comment:

  1. hehe...I like the idea of throwing the stephamsters in a pit! Great story, Haley.

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